See your current grade sheet- this will improve once you update the blog but reflects where you are at the moment particularly as the school magazine work is missing. Your comments on magazines are sound but you must review some of your comments on target audience.
In addition go into more depth on representation and connotation throughout your work.
Eleanor Coombs 
Sound comments but you need to focus on music magazines at this stage- add two music magazines to this please.
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See your current grade sheet- this will improve once you update the blog but reflects where you are at the moment particularly as the school magazine work is missing. Your comments on magazines are sound but you must review some of your comments on target audience.
In addition go into more depth on representation and connotation throughout your work.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1lPkvmc8Uo2oZOcQMfgXHH7Vy9bPJR465bWydtkG2hx8/edit#gid=0
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